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1)
In our country, summer holiday is the longest holiday in a year. I often went to sea with my family every summer holidays. But last summer me go to sea with my friends. I had many memories with my friends.
The trip had seven people; four boys and three girls. We learnt same class together. So far we have been close friends. On holiday, we only slept four hours a day and the rest time we went sightseeing
At the morning, we get up early to see sunrise. it's a great morning. After that we went swimming. In the evening, we went along seaside. At that time the wave seemed gentler than it was in the afternoon. We took a lot of photographs. All of us were indeed happy.
At the last day, there was a small problem with me. Maybe I do not eat seafood.
After three days, we came back home. I think it was great time in my life
2)
I was born in a quiet village where the influence of the city is not much.
My village is situated along shore in the Red River. It is a very good place for relaxation indeed. My hometown is very quiet and peaceful, there wasn’t too much houses and people.
In my village, people live very close to each another. The people is very simple in thought and behavior. Therefore they are friendly and helpful . So, the crimes of the city are almost unknown in my village. The people work together and live in peace. I love them. With me, the best memories of my life are closely with my hometown.
Now I am living in Hanoi capital. I want to come back my hometown very much. Living among such friendly and simple people, in such a quiet village, is indeed a real pleasure.
3)
My family has 4 people. The are my parents, my brother and me.
My family lives in a small house in a quiet village. The house is made of brick and covered with red tiles. It has 4 rooms, a living-room, 2 bedrooms and a kitchen. The living-room small but is decorated with beautiful pictures on the walls. My bedroom is also decorated with funny pictures. The kitchen is tidy and well equipped with a gas cooker, a washing-machine and a refrigerator. Around the house is a large garden with many fruit-trees and flowers.
I like this house very much. It is the place where I was born and grew up. It has given me good memories since my childhood. I wish I would live in it forever.
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1)
In our country, summer holiday is the longest holiday in a year. I often went to sea with my family every summer holidays. But last summer me go to sea with my friends. I had many memories with my friends.
The trip had seven people; four boys and three girls. We learnt same class together. So far we have been close friends. On holiday, we only slept four hours a day and the rest time we went sightseeing
At the morning, we get up early to see sunrise. it's a great morning. After that we went swimming. In the evening, we went along seaside. At that time the wave seemed gentler than it was in the afternoon. We took a lot of photographs. All of us were indeed happy.
At the last day, there was a small problem with me. Maybe I do not eat seafood.
After three days, we came back home. I think it was great time in my life
2)
I was born in a quiet village where the influence of the city is not much.
My village is situated along shore in the Red River. It is a very good place for relaxation indeed. My hometown is very quiet and peaceful, there wasn’t too much houses and people.
In my village, people live very close to each another. The people is very simple in thought and behavior. Therefore they are friendly and helpful . So, the crimes of the city are almost unknown in my village. The people work together and live in peace. I love them. With me, the best memories of my life are closely with my hometown.
Now I am living in Hanoi capital. I want to come back my hometown very much. Living among such friendly and simple people, in such a quiet village, is indeed a real pleasure.
3)
My family has 4 people. The are my parents, my brother and me.
My family lives in a small house in a quiet village. The house is made of brick and covered with red tiles. It has 4 rooms, a living-room, 2 bedrooms and a kitchen. The living-room small but is decorated with beautiful pictures on the walls. My bedroom is also decorated with funny pictures. The kitchen is tidy and well equipped with a gas cooker, a washing-machine and a refrigerator. Around the house is a large garden with many fruit-trees and flowers.
I like this house very much. It is the place where I was born and grew up. It has given me good memories since my childhood. I wish I would live in it forever.
anh chị giúp em với ak thank all
